Fiddle the Gold Fish - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a narrative story.

Success Criteria: I am successful when I can use capital letters, full stops and correct spelling,and write in paragraph form correctly.

Fiddle the gold fish was small. She had thick scales. She was a fish eater. Fiddle had sharp teeth.

One day Fiddle swam up on a fish, she didn't know that the fish was hooked on a fishing rod. Fiddle tried to eat the fish but it was  stuck on the hook. The fisherman felt something unusual and pulled the string up, a gold fish came up.

The fisherman felt bad for the gold fish so he quickly took her to a place that look after sea creatures.

The keepers of the aquarium check her and took good care of her, they gave her a beautiful name. It was Fiddle. They called her fiddle, because she fiddles around with her tail. The keepers thanked the fisherman for bringing the gold fish to them. Fiddle's wonderful life had just begun.