Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 26 November 2019

Cockles - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning about cockles.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can explain about why cockles are disappearing and how we can stop it.



What are cockles?
Cockles are edible. They are shellfish and are also called bivalves. Cockles live in sandy beaches. They are known species in the family of the Cardiidae. The shell of a cockle is able to close completely. Cockles jump by bending and straightening its foot to escape from their predators like human, so they can protect themselves from the humans who gathers them.

Why are cockles disappearing?

Cockles are disappearing, because people keeps gathering more than 50 cockles. A woman who has been collecting with her daughter and son collected 3,594 cockles.

We can stop the cockles from disappearing by putting a sign in beaches to remind people who gathers cockles that they can only gather "50 cockles per person" or if they disobey, they will pay $600.

Autumn Leaves - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a poem.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a poem about Autumn leaves.

Leaves on my dress,

Leaves on my hair,
Autumn Leaves are everywhere.

Leaves on my sleeves,

Leaves on my shirt,
Autumn Leaves are on the dirt,

Leaves in my socks,

Leaves in my shoes,
Autumn Leaves took away my flues.

Leaves in my shoes,

Leaves on the rack,
Autumn Leaves are on my back.

Leaves in my book,

Leaves on my chair,
Autumn Leaves are on the air.

Alice in Emerald Kingdom - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story with a different beginning and ending.

Once upon a time, deep in the forest lived a little girl named Alice. Alice was my best friend. She has long golden hair, her skin was fair and smooth and has white, shiny teeth.


One day, me and Alice were playing hide and seek tag but when I was hiding behind a tree I saw a cute white rabbit running towards me. The rabbit was holding a small suitcase, clockwise and a hat on the top of his head. I called Alice to join me following the rabbit. So we ran and ran as fast as we can, but the rabbit vanished and we got lost in the middle of the forest. We looked around, until we saw a portal and went in.


In the portal, there was an Emerald Kingdom. We explored half of the kingdom, because we saw the white rabbit running to his emerald house, so we quickly decided to follow him once again. He quickly got his gloves and hand fan. Alice and I went in the house. It was marvellous inside. We saw lots of useful things and a 'Yummy Emerald Cake'. We tried to take a piece of bite, but the cute white rabbit saw us and got scared. He tried to defend him self so he bite us both on our hand. The bite made us fell asleep. The cute white rabbit was clever and intelligent. He summoned a portal and put Alice and I in. We fell on a field with a huge thud.


Alice and I woke up. We realised it was just a dream. So we went and talk to our families about our wonderful dream about Emerald kingdom and we lived in peace.

What is a Good Friend - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to write an explanation.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write an explanation about what is a good friend using capital letters and full stops in paragraph form correctly.

A good friend is a buddy that takes care of you when you get hurt. Some friends makes bad choices that they become bad and mean to you. A good friend doesn't break a promise and they always stands up for you when you get bullied.

In the movie, room 1 had a very good presentation about making friends. I observed that making friends is a good thing to do, because it makes you and your friend happy.

You can make friends by standing up for someone who gets bullied or.....
For Example:
You were playing balls with a girl and you accidentally throw the ball at her face.
To make friends with her you should apologise for throwing the ball at her face.

Sometimes making friends are hard to do, because they can be mean or have a bad attitude but it does not mean you should stop making friends. You should continue.

MY FRIENDS ARE ELLMA, CHADWICK, PAUL, ANGELINA, GISELLE, BENJAMIN, MATTHEW, AMIEL AND APRIL.

Tuesday, 2 April 2019

Thursday, 24 May 2018

My Autobiography - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to write our autobiography.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write my autobiography using adjectives and in paragraph form.

!!!Yesha!!!

My name is Yesha. I am 9 years old. November, 2008 is my birthday. Elmar and Edilyn are my awesome parents.

Kevin and Enzo are my handsome brothers. Jamilla is my pretty Sister. Elly, Grace, Cheche and Evalin are my caring aunties. Julius, Elpidio. J, and Norwin are my helpful uncles. Norma, Vita, Antonio and Elpidio. S are my lovely grandparents.

I love to read Ballerina, Owl Diaries, Learn from the Great Teacher and Ella Diaries because its fun reading with my brother. I like to play soccer, gymnastics and basketball. It is fun to play with my family  and do the exercise. Fight song, The Havana, and The Cup are my favourite songs because these are fun to sing with my mum.

Maths, P.E and Writing are my favourite subjects to learn. It is challenging to my brain and fun learning with my classmates. Olympics, Miraculous, The Simpson, Transylvania Hotel, Spy Squad, Sherlock Gnomes, Harry Potter and Enchantadia are my favourite T.V programs. It is fun to watch them with my family.  Noodles, fruit salad and sour patch are my favourite foods because these foods are yummy.

Apples, mango and pear are my favourite fruits. I love to draw, play pop the pig, roblox and minecraft. My wonderful best friends are Aleenah, Augustine, Angelina, April, Tyrah, Giselle, Peter, Matthew, Paul, Erich, Ellma, Lupe, Amiel, Eldritch, Lolonese, Ana maria and Mele'ana. They cheer me up when I am hurt.