Glaring Bear - By Yesha

Learning Intention: We are learning to to write a narrative story.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using capital letters, full stops and paragraph correctly.

Once there was a gigantic bear. She had a thick fur. She was a fish eater with massive sharp teeth that can crunch fish bones.

One day she saw an enormous fish, but it swam away when it saw her. She tried to catch it, but she fell in the water she hit her head on the rock and she fainted.

Luckily a hunter walked by the river and found the drowning bear. He rescued her and quickly took her to the zoo.

The zookeepers check and took good care of her. They gave her a beautiful name. It was Glaring bear. They call her Glaring bear, because she glares at the zookeepers. The zookeepers thank the hunter for bringing the poor bear to them. Glare's wonderful life had begun and she live happily ever after.

Comment: Good writing Yesha, this is a wonderful story. Ana Stacia.
Comment: Good Yesha and continue to check your spelling. Aleenah.